Dans l'ensemble, c'est un message convaincant qui incite à la réflexion. Avec une feuille de route un peu plus claire à la fin, il pourrait passer de l'inspiration à la mobilisation.

This is a powerful and engaging piece. I really appreciate how you connect everyday realities like boreholes, traffic jams, and boda riders to the bigger question of Africa’s development. It makes the argument feel grounded and relatable. The narrative flows well, and the repetition of “attitude” gives it rhythm and emphasis. One area to strengthen could be the call to action. Right now, the piece ends with a strong slogan“development isn’t about big money; it’s about bold mindsets” which inspires. But you could go one step further by suggesting what practical actions individuals, communities, or leaders can take to embody that bold mindset. That way, the reader leaves not just motivated, but also with a sense of direction.